 i'm not dead yet 2009-01-05 . chapter 5loved it |
 Hybrid Rainbow 2008-09-04 . chapter 5Fun stuff.
You should continue. |
 JtheChosen1 2008-07-25 . chapter 5this is a gr8 story! i hope u update soon! |
 alysia-moon 2008-06-12 . chapter 5Wat happened? It's been so long since you last updated... >. |
 Ruri Star Sykel 2007-06-06 . chapter 5AH! i love it! this is so hot! sorry i can't think of any better words for it! |
 Sirivinda 2007-03-19 . chapter 5Wow. This story is really hot. The idea of turning a "dom" into a sub is just so much more appealling than just finding a sub to start with. The whole humiliation aspect is so much more interesting when you've got someone who's still fighting his situation. Very well done, indeed. You seriously need to update though. Both this (pretty please?) and your other stories. I've been waiting for updates for your tattoo stories for a while now, but I'm going to give up soon, I'm telling you. It's so long inbetween that I manage to forgot what it was about once the update come. So if there's any way I could possibly threat you into updating this, let me know. ;) Does virtual reality uzis work on you at all?
No, seriously. I do love this story, and please update it. |
 DeadlyBeautiful. 2007-02-07 . chapter 1 I've reviewed this before, but I can't wait to find out what happens next! I hope you start writing this story again. |
 Aymery 2006-11-13 . chapter 5Ok could you please continue with this story I need to know what happens next. Does Trevor now hate Gianni even more cause of what he did? Will he ever be able to trust him again? I need answers...cause your story is so great. :) |
 Midnights Scream 2006-05-30 . chapter 5it's a really good story and I hope you update this is my favorite story of your's |
 jess 2006-03-15 . chapter 5 Wow that kinda sucks, I think during this hold Gang rape scene Gianni should be watching trevor and see his discomfort and make it all stop. Or Trevor should never talk to Gianni ever again. |
 Diablo Darkmoon 2006-01-11 . chapter 5I love it...I loved the first three chapters...I loved the fourth...and I love the fifth.you have such a great way of writing... and it sends so many images through the head. I'm glad you finally decided to update this one! I can't wait for the next chapters to come.-DiabloDarkmoon |
 afk 2006-01-09 . chapter 5wrar hot chappie! ^~ |
 Ryoko3600 2006-01-07 . chapter 5continue |
 Cherise 2006-01-07 . chapter 5 Mmph. I really can't believe Trevor just gave in like that( though it made for some truly enjoyablr reading)...he truly was a sub from the beginning, hm? He just...somehow didn't know it? |
 Tom 2006-01-07 . chapter 5 great story! The contest sounds like fun! |