These would make awesome songs sung out loud...to audiences...*cough*hint*cough*

hm. this one has me wondering...

Wow, I love this, I like the line die as well, awesome job!

I bet if you put all of the words together and form sentences, you could make a really good suicide note out of this...sorry that was random..But anyway, I think you should make the message clearer...other than that, I really liked it.

-freak from the corner