that's beautiful. i really like it. keep writing.

blood sugar and misspellings. ~erAced~

Ooh... beautiful. "And that you’ll never cry like I cried" Wonderful line. The whole thing is just so sad. I especially liked the whole scarlet to silver thing... very cool. Awesome work, keep it up!

beautiful... that's all I can say... and your begining lines (I shed tears of scarlet,

Fading silver as they slide down my cheek.) they're amazing...

justadding u to my alert list...

thanks ella, love you both...

omgh i cried... i luv u!! and i luv u paula!!

oh my god i almost started crying.

whoa. that was amazing. i started crying.

This is really good... sad... but good keep up the good wrk

That's really pretty and sad...