thats so sad. Its sad to that inspiration is easier to find when we're not happy, well not just not happy, but in pain. i like the image of the dark between the stars. until you find your own inspiration, borrow someone elses. reading a really good poem often inspires me to write my own. let me know when you find a girl so i can make sure shes worthy of youre genius :-D

Aww this is brilliant. And if you can write poetry as good as this im sure youll get a girlfriend in not time. I no I wouldnt say no...hehe

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Yes i think you do need gf. It might do you the world of good. That way possibly you wouldn't be as stuck in The Inbetween. It ain't that random, otherwise your saying everyone who writes poetry i writig some random crap. Maybe we are, maybe we aren't...

But as i said before, Good poet and keep it up or I'll bop you on the head.Cheers mate, Dani

HA HA HAYes one does lack inspiration when love is absentSorry i have some mental issuesWell hey its damn good for random crapHey give mine a buzz when fic press lets me upload my stuff-Ode to Maddness

this is breathtaking. no. really. i forgot to breathe until i was done.

this is the most colorful depiction of the grayest area of human emotion.

and, like your worry of cliche for the topic, i don't want to risk a faux pas by saying, "can i be your girlfriend?"...

so don't worry about either of us being so unoriginal, okay?! heehee haha

cutiepants.