This is really amazing. I love the way you put so much emotion and melancholy into it. Great imagery. Thanks for the review. I think you, are a talented writer. :D

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Ah...*googly smile*

Your friend is really good at thinking up titles but this content was excellent. I like the way you added sounds into your poem, and the lines "I was awakened with the sky crying, big, disgraceful tears. Tip. Tap." was simply powerful yet touching. Good job.

~~Trinity