wow. now i am angry that you never submitted. that was amazing. Same jacket I remember? I can picture the whole thing so well. Was this an acutal event? Another crazy person that loves rain.

4.30, huh? I've been waking up around noon, so 4.30 is completely insane to me. But school starts again, and I have to go. Damned mornings.

Nice indeed. I like the description of the clothes, and the deeper meanings of the poem.

Strong poem, and its length suits it. Well wrote, Tatsu

*sits back on chair in awe* That was really cool... I never thought a walk in the rain by yourself would do such a thing. Maybe that's because i had never really tried to walk in the rain by myself. I always have someone around. This poem deserves as many reviews as it can get. It is bloody brilliant. And think away, sometimes thinking can be better for all of us, if we ever get the oppurtunity.

Cheers, Dani

this is written even BETTER than the last, but better isn't the word since these are 2 different topics, styles, etc.

OMG i can't get into all the elements of beauty here. But I can say, that I instinctively read it out loud. It had the distinct sound/feel of a perfect reading for a poetry night; the cool ones in stylish but small out-of-the-way cafes. Maybe light jazz tones soflty behind it.

Even though it was much longer (amazingly so!) than I had planned it to be, WOULD YOU BELIEVE that it kept the time and manner, enough to make it a appropriate story reading in the same atmosphere.

hey when you're feeling a bit better... want to go somewhere and try that out? just checking. :D

whoops, um after you read my latest poem you may actually consider...!

Well I AM gonna review because I really liked it. I mean supremely. Cheers to you... especially the part about after-rain smell, because that is my fave smell in the world ^-^. Beautifully descriptive. And, oh yeah, thanks for your many lovely reviews.

that's beautiful; i love walking in the rain, or just sitting in it, letting it stroke my back and shoulders, angels tears... nice description, i like it!Very long poem, but it was good; i like how the person does have faith and hope at the end even though they had a dark outlook before hand