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Reviews For: Liquorice and Lollipops
M.L. Burt 2005-09-04 . chapter 1
This is really funny! Nice one :) Not much to critique here, it's supposed to be humorous, and it is! So it's great! :D
mepoindexter 2005-08-31 . chapter 1
Kind of vulgar, I think
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