Very nice, simple, and concise. Again, I enjoy the message in your work. One quick critique:

You've ended with "mind", which was kinda jarring. I'm not sure why; however, I'd consider ending differently. Maybe:

"Confined within
your eternal
self"

It's fine as is; yet, for some reason the repeition of "mind" jarred me. This is petty, I know.

Good job. Write on!

lovely, well written

that's cool; I like especially the first two lines, but i also like the ideas. Nice imagery...Mind/Vines of Memoryvery cool