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Reviews For: Without Warning
Sam 2005-10-24 . chapter 1
there's a bit of socialist in us all ;)
1941 2005-09-11 . chapter 1
I liked the idea of this. The comparison to natural disaster was really good. I felt the execution was lacking. If you gave more imagery I think it would improve. The brevity of this may have been intentional, but I just felt that the ending was tagged on as an after thought.
cherry-luard 2005-08-31 . chapter 1
Wow.

Thats just about awsome. I love your comparison of 'without warning' between random violence, and natural disasters.

Makes sense. Good job.
Adam 2005-08-31 . chapter 1
That is good i really enjyed reading it, it really opens your mind to alot of the things that we don't normally pay attention to
Mike 2005-08-31 . chapter 1
well...i like your view on politics. not a bad peice of work :)
Gaz 2005-08-31 . chapter 1
Haven't got much time, so a quicky review it is...

Cool.

Um, sorry, would say more but - gotta dash!
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