 Sam 2005-10-24 . chapter 1 there's a bit of socialist in us all ;) |
 1941 2005-09-11 . chapter 1I liked the idea of this. The comparison to natural disaster was really good. I felt the execution was lacking. If you gave more imagery I think it would improve. The brevity of this may have been intentional, but I just felt that the ending was tagged on as an after thought. |
 cherry-luard 2005-08-31 . chapter 1Wow.
Thats just about awsome. I love your comparison of 'without warning' between random violence, and natural disasters.
Makes sense. Good job. |
 Adam 2005-08-31 . chapter 1 That is good i really enjyed reading it, it really opens your mind to alot of the things that we don't normally pay attention to |
 Mike 2005-08-31 . chapter 1 well...i like your view on politics. not a bad peice of work :) |
 Gaz 2005-08-31 . chapter 1 Haven't got much time, so a quicky review it is...
Cool.
Um, sorry, would say more but - gotta dash! |