Favorite line: "Sugarcoated hormones in the canvas dark." Definitely the strongest line in the entire poem. Just the description is fantastic and original. Great job. Keep writing! :)

really interesting and cool

good...really speaks to me...very deep. lots of love ~AllyCred~

Nice job, it's intoxicating. Finally, some new things from you to read! Hehe.

It's great the way lines like "down in the darkness... on top of the world" give it a real sense of confusion, which I guess narcotics can do.

Look luv, If I've told you once I've told you a thousand times...