I liked this, short but sweet :)

This is a really beautiful poem. Short and sweet but very deep. Great piece. Thanks for your review! QueenVixta

I agree, thoughts are elusive, like clouds. Very good.

Wow. This was really good. I love short poems, you don't hafta sit around and read and read to search for the point, it's right there in front of you. I love this because its a good subject and you use great examples. Keep writing.

That was really cool! Great description of thoughts. :-) Keep writing!

Absolutely beautifully written! The cycle of thots.