really ineteresting.. love that last line

i like it...i love the structure and the wording is very intense and deep...well done...i love it. lots of love ~AllyCred~

The imagery in this paints a chaotic picture, it's effective. Nice rhythm too, 'feels like it knows what it's doing underneath the panic of the scenery.

Yup, sunday night was mental. And our field was one of the quiet ones...

I like the way this conveys the panic as the apocalypse.

Hey! How are you?

Your excuse for a poem is crap. Kindly do not burden our eyes/ears with such trash again.

Cheers! :-D

nice sense of chaos and panic, seems to invoke hell on earth. not quite as i saw it but hey.