UPDATE

SOON!

*raises hand* Oh, oh, I'll edit. I love the chance to edit others' works, because, in fixing typos, I learn what to avoid myself. If you're interested in having me as an editor, email me at italiangemini@verizon.net

To the story review: I really like this idea. This school is (unfortunately or not) a lot like mine. The characters seem interesting and full of, well, life. By the way, I'd much rather edit a story I'm interested than one that's boring.

Keep up the crative writing,

TTM