*applause* Well written friend heehee xRachx

Hello! I like the - I can't decide how to say it - the quality of your vocabulary. You use varied words that really show the reader exactly what you mean. I think the rhythm was a bit off (I always whisper aloud when I'm reading to see if it sounds right...), but usually a line only sounded odd because of one syllable. That's just my opinion, by the way.

Keep up the inspiring work,

TTM

P.S. In the last line, you added an extra "s" on "these."