I thought the sentiment was just beautiful. I really liked how it seemed almost like a conversation between the two lovers. Keep writing.-JM

That was so very pretty... I almost gagged, but that's just me. I thought it was great, really. You're right, people don't love others because they're perfect - they love them for their flaws. The flaws make them unique, without them they're just another face, just another person in the crowd. You voiced this wonderfully, as you have most others.

-Raven