Ha! ^^ To answer your question: perfect! (Not that the former was in any way bad!) I still got giddy reading that Okabe speech for some reason...*shrugging* Good chapter!
Pretty. (Tis the black moon -ff.net-, btw) I hope to read mo-ore! This isn't the end, is it? Your Japanese is fine, too, don't worry about it! I am faving this one. See ya! (all your fics here are great also, btw)