I love this one!...couldn't explain why...it's just...wow!

This is amazingly well written. I don't usually review other people's work, but this was really awesome. Keep it up. ^_^

I love this. It's like darkness calling out that they want to be light. Really well-written. Great imagery. I especially love 'Crying tears of swollen glass'. Great line.

Well done. Keep up the beautiful work.

*Hillary*