Very well written :)

You had been dating her - so why was it such a shock? You seem very sweet so why not love? Great writing skills.

I get that sense of freedom skying. Too fast down a hill and noone within yelling distance.

I can relate to this, considering dentists cause pain, and yes they do. But yeah the pain wasn't bad I guess since I had to get four molars out, i've gotten two pulled out now and waiting for the other two to grow out at least. And I got a pair of... Knee Pads as a gift from getting two teeth pulled out. What a nice dentist! Oh well keep on writing anyway, i'm looking forward to more.

I relate to this, mostly at the end being close to true freedom. You described the way I feel and how you as well experience it. Keep up the chapters.

Melanie

I loved this chapter, it was fresh and fun to read. Keep up the work!

Keep up the work. I love it!

Nice. I liked it.