That's really neat. Love the title, love the ending, love the concept, love the action. This is a very optimistic story, no matter how gory and bloody. Definitely love it.
Wow, pretty. Sometimes it reminded me, especially the whole not-much-dialogue thing and the first paragraph for some reason. Well that one part was sorta... gory. I don't really like that kind of stuff but I'll let it slide because I love everything else.