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Sweet Songs of Surrender 2006-04-09 . chapter 1
this is so much like i feel some of the time, well done, i love it!
Cool-Ruzz 2005-11-23 . chapter 1
I loved this. This would make a pretty song and a really pretty poem as well. I loved the lines,

'I feel so over looked,

So second rate.'

Nice. This was Bella!! Keep on writing!
TrinityFlower of Memories 2005-10-10 . chapter 1
Wow, That's how I feel whenever I didn't get somthing that I deserved or someone had beaten me at something. Thanks for the review! Great work!
jayk 2005-10-09 . chapter 1
This reminds me of the Internal Suffering song I made, same message but I think your song portrays it much clearer. Well done.
cassie 2005-09-02 . chapter 1
oh...everyone feels like that at some point in their life. i feel like it all the time, i look ahead and i worry i wont get as good marks as other ppl and stuff. or i will never acheive what they did. i look at you all the time and think: wow you are so good at everything, why cant i be like that.that was a really good song, i loved it. nice writng.
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