this is so much like i feel some of the time, well done, i love it!

I loved this. This would make a pretty song and a really pretty poem as well. I loved the lines,

'I feel so over looked,

So second rate.'

Nice. This was Bella!! Keep on writing!

Wow, That's how I feel whenever I didn't get somthing that I deserved or someone had beaten me at something. Thanks for the review! Great work!

This reminds me of the Internal Suffering song I made, same message but I think your song portrays it much clearer. Well done.

oh...everyone feels like that at some point in their life. i feel like it all the time, i look ahead and i worry i wont get as good marks as other ppl and stuff. or i will never acheive what they did. i look at you all the time and think: wow you are so good at everything, why cant i be like that.that was a really good song, i loved it. nice writng.