Wow! I like this story, and thanks for the reference of Tegan and Sara. Needless to say, I was getting bored with no music to listen to. Hehe.

~Randi

Interesting. I like the lead, it hooks the audience. I know that the run on sentences are for effect, but they come off as a bit pretentious, so maybe through a bit more periods in there.

Thats kind of really funny! :)

Nice bit of work ^^

Oh, I likey!

The corn bit made me giggle :D.

And the ending "Besides, I'd rather keep you a secret a bit longer."

::squeels:: I love it cause it seems that Shauna is a little-itty-bit standing-on-the-edge-my-twin-sister-is-gay-what-should-I-do oh-my-god kind of girl. And then, it turns out she has a girlfriend and hallelujah! Redemption!

::squees again, just for the fun of it:: Brilliant!

Best of Luck in all of your writing,

Channa

ooh! i liked!i loved the ending too!

Again, this was interesting to read.

This was funny. I loved the twist at the end. Great job! :)

Hahah. I liked that. xD Ending twists are always good. =)

This one is not autobiographical, actually. I have a sister, but I don't have a twin. And my sister isn't gay...I don't think.

^_^ My family knows I'm bi... My mom doesn't exactly like it... I don't know about my dad... I brought my g/f to meet them once... scary people.. We both moved away from the town we lived in though ppl were prosecuting us for being like we were... ^_^ glad things worked out for your sister

cool

Very interesting! The last sentence got me wanting to read more. I'll be reading the next chapter for sure.

I like the ferst chapter. I will eegerlly look forwerd to your next update.

This is a nice story. x)

With a tiny little cliffy.

I like it!