Wow! You are good! Thanks for all the great reviews! You rock!

Great Poem!

Keep writing!

nice metaphor..I like this haiku a lot better than some of your others

Don't know if you purposely placed the last line not centered with the first two but I must say I am atracted by it for Yes, it seems that oft in order before going forward we go backward as it were in the learning of new life lessons. Connie/Maisha

Some things are best learned alone to gain strength.

To drown against you... nice.

Cool, but I liked "Moonlight Baby" a lot more!

Very nice. I like how you express the conflicting aspects of losing one's individuality and gaining strength that sometimes come up in new relationships with the swimming metaphor (at least that's what I saw ).

Lovely formatting. Beautiful. Faves.

very nice. the whole theme of it is great. _-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-

ah yes...

deep.

Solo.

Is the part intentional? That baffles me, and if it's meant to be there then it'll require a thorough re-read. I like it a lot though, it expresses a gentle rhythm.

a gorgeous haiku. deep, moving and passionate. I love it.

* noelle

aw. this is sad. makes me contemplate things going on with me and my friends. Submissive and sad.