What. The. **.
A blind,
gay,
street gang member?
That is effing peculiar.

AW i love ur story so muchh! i read all of it...** THEIR CUTE!!... omg i no this is like...realistic..but...how cute would this be...MPREG!...aww just imagine Kayan all prengnant and cute...er... love u btw

Not really gonna go into how it bothers me that they didn't use condoms, but yea - that could have happened.

Otherwise, very good.

I KNEW IT! I knew he got SOMETHING.

Butthole Nick

I was wondering when you're going to update.

This is an extremely good story this shows what its like to be gay and thats its not just all about sex! I love it!Charlene

AWS! I wuv it! *snuggles Kayan and James* X3 Those two are simply gorgeous! =3 DAS IST SER SUS! X3 *huggles them tighter* Mweep!

this is so cute i read it about 20 times and i'm shooting for 50 love it

Fwe ^^ Still very much enamoured with this fic. Writemorewritemorewritemore!

Oh Bengal what a silly spaniard, maybe he will be able to do some good with Kayan by talking to him. Keep up the good work.

Wow... o.o Such tremendous indescribable love for this fic!

Know how you feel with the muses thing. XD I've got fourteen and only two of them are actually straight.

I can't remember if I reviewed before but this is the first time I've read right through since you rewrote stuff and added the new chapters. OH HOW I ADORE IT! As for the last chapter, I love them ALL! I was a big fan of James/Dan and Dan/Bengal made me cry. Though, of course, James/Kayan is the OTP. I thught it was kind of a shame you didn't do more with the Melodie/Dimitria one, but hey, femmeslash isn't everyone's thing. Fairy snuff.

Can I give one tiny criticism that's been bugging me all the way through? When you mean "as well" it's TOO, not to. Double O. Some else has probably already said this and if so, sorry, but I just couldn't not mention it.

I love this fic so so so much. Well done.

Oh my ** god. You really DID redo the whole thing! I LUVED IT, DUDE! LUVLUVLUVLUVLUVLUVLUV! ... Okay, I love your story, man! And my favourite chappies are The Beauty of the Whole Stupid Situation, Love is Forever, and the... uh... last two. XD

About the very last thing you did? Chpt 22, as it's written on this form? I LOVED THAT TOO! Spazzy McSpaz- I mean, James, was so CUTE! And I liked it how you continuesly argued with him. He can be such a dolt, it seemed. Poor, poor Jamers. XD Fave un-real pairings are DEFINATELY Kayan and Marlo, and James and Dan. =3 Well, hope to read more! I love your stories. XD

only James can have Kayan. That's all I'm going to say...oh, and I hate Dan. Okay that's all. Fantastic job, btw. Loved the story so far...my favorite character is Kayan...who can't help but love him? Update soon!

Hey Gurl! OMG i think that Kayan and Marlo - James and Dan are perfection!! lol but u knew that already, neways you must add more NOW!

~MUAH~

&*Meg*&

i liked the whole dimitria and melodie thing it would work