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| NFMadProps04 2007-09-21 ch 19, | abuseNot really gonna go into how it bothers me that they didn't use condoms, but yea - that could have happened. Otherwise, very good. |
| NFMadProps04 2007-09-21 ch 17, | abuseI KNEW IT! I knew he got SOMETHING. Butthole Nick |
| merrymowmow 2006-12-08 ch 23, | abuseI was wondering when you're going to update. |
| Charlene 2006-09-23 ch 23, anon. | abuseThis is an extremely good story this shows what its like to be gay and thats its not just all about sex! I love it!Charlene |
| Star Kitten 2006-06-05 ch 23, anon. | abuseAWS! I wuv it! *snuggles Kayan and James* X3 Those two are simply gorgeous! =3 DAS IST SER SUS! X3 *huggles them tighter* Mweep! |
| Sweet But Evil Beauty 2006-05-31 ch 1, | abusethis is so cute i read it about 20 times and i'm shooting for 50 love it |
| adventureseeker 2006-05-28 ch 23, | abuseFwe ^^ Still very much enamoured with this fic. Writemorewritemorewritemore! |
| BloodyDestiny 2006-05-18 ch 23, | abuseOh Bengal what a silly spaniard, maybe he will be able to do some good with Kayan by talking to him. Keep up the good work. |
| adventureseeker 2006-04-18 ch 22, | abuseWow... o.o Such tremendous indescribable love for this fic! Know how you feel with the muses thing. XD I've got fourteen and only two of them are actually straight. I can't remember if I reviewed before but this is the first time I've read right through since you rewrote stuff and added the new chapters. OH HOW I ADORE IT! As for the last chapter, I love them ALL! I was a big fan of James/Dan and Dan/Bengal made me cry. Though, of course, James/Kayan is the OTP. I thught it was kind of a shame you didn't do more with the Melodie/Dimitria one, but hey, femmeslash isn't everyone's thing. Fairy snuff. Can I give one tiny criticism that's been bugging me all the way through? When you mean "as well" it's TOO, not to. Double O. Some else has probably already said this and if so, sorry, but I just couldn't not mention it. I love this fic so so so much. Well done. |
| Star Kitty 2006-04-08 ch 22, anon. | abuseOh my ** god. You really DID redo the whole thing! I LUVED IT, DUDE! LUVLUVLUVLUVLUVLUVLUV! ... Okay, I love your story, man! And my favourite chappies are The Beauty of the Whole Stupid Situation, Love is Forever, and the... uh... last two. XD About the very last thing you did? Chpt 22, as it's written on this form? I LOVED THAT TOO! Spazzy McSpaz- I mean, James, was so CUTE! And I liked it how you continuesly argued with him. He can be such a dolt, it seemed. Poor, poor Jamers. XD Fave un-real pairings are DEFINATELY Kayan and Marlo, and James and Dan. =3 Well, hope to read more! I love your stories. XD |
| NOTPOSTING 2006-03-23 ch 22, | abuseonly James can have Kayan. That's all I'm going to say...oh, and I hate Dan. Okay that's all. Fantastic job, btw. Loved the story so far...my favorite character is Kayan...who can't help but love him? Update soon! |
| skool-gurl 2006-03-14 ch 22, | abuseHey Gurl! OMG i think that Kayan and Marlo - James and Dan are perfection!! lol but u knew that already, neways you must add more NOW! ~MUAH~ &*Meg*& |
| translusantbutterfly 2006-03-13 ch 22, anon. | abusei liked the whole dimitria and melodie thing it would work |
| Single Black Rose 2006-03-11 ch 22, | abusei honestly think that i much prefer Kayan and James together...but the girlie one at the end could have been interesting too...lol...I agree with James in the Dan and Bengal scene, i hate people who beat up their loves...i had one relationship that thankfully didn't get that far, but i got yelled at enough to get seriously ** off...well, enough about me, now for your work...i think you have a good idea in mixing couples...depending on your reviews, you could make a whole story about trading places and jealousy and those who can't handle the game...ttyl! Single Black Rose |
| Garrett Bringer 2006-03-08 ch 21, | abuseThat was pretty good. And I commend you for having the stamina to sit there and rewrite your work. That ticks me off to no end! Congratulations, I hope I get that go foreward attitude someday! |