For the first two-thirds of the poem i was bored to death. Then things picked up. I wanted to single out some lines that i especially liked, so here goes:"This is the never-ending tale/Of little children’s horrors", "The yin without the yang is useless" and "I won’t forget you/I’ll come back/We’ll visit you in the dead of night/When you’re thirty/You’ll remember me again/In one of your childhood nightmares". Whith the last one, it wasn't so much the wording as the concept. i think lots of this will stick with me for a while. Keep writing.