Wow, this is definitley going onto my faveorites. Your work always surprises me, I love it.

It has that frantic feel, which pulls the reader in without ANY warning. Powerful peice indeed. Yup, Ive returned again, again. Now Im back for good.Its all a long story, but, the zombie man is coming back life...oh, Im gonna post the rest of the rock opera, so be ready!

very powerful.. ncie repition.. well written

There could be a drug refrence, which deepens this poem, making it all a bad, bad LSD trip...but I doubt it was meant to mean that.

Wow. Very emotive piece; great imagery and use of repetition. Powerful work.