really catchy and flowy, i greatly enjoyed.

Very good, I particularly like the first bit, about screaming at the stars.

This summers at a closing.. summer's

I like all the metaphots here to stars & the stage.. very cool & well done

awesome

I really like this, the rhythm was excellent and the imagery was very clear. Just a note, though, you say "Your" twice, but it should be "You're"...*grammar freak*~A. Person

like how you capitalized the You's and the imagery was fantastic. nice piece.