Wow. Amazing. I don't think I've ever read a poem about fire before. Unique topic and a lovely job in the writing. If I ever read another poem about fire, I highly doubt it will be as wonderfully written as this. Excellent job! :)

- Sarah

good, but doesn't hold enough substance on it's own... write more... please... keep the style and add extra chapters... *hopes* i will be back to see..

Hoofah! I like this one. Your deliberate lack of punctuation fits the subject of the poem PERFECTLY. Fire has no boundaries, therfore there'll BE NO BOUNDARIES in this poem.. Hee hee haa!!

I like fire. I also like that this poem is in one verse... or is it? Hm... Well, anyway, your technique is absolutely fantasmigorical! It's simple enough for readers like me to follow. Keep up the wonderful writing!!

~ Pleasant Sins

P.S.Thanks a million for the reviews!

really good...i like it

"Forceful Fearful" Excellent choice of words there. Very good.