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| twenty-second seduction 2005-12-30 ch 1, | abusethis is beautiful. |
| Gemma Viridian 2005-11-02 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely love the poetry you write. You've got a compelling, unique style that really keeps the reader emotionally hooked. Nice job. (Oh, and I agree 100% with the Reagan thing in your profile. Any ** who tries to pass ketchup off as a goddamn vegetable to avoid funding public schools is not a compassionate man.) |
| MaxxRidarr 2005-10-30 ch 1, | abuseWhere did this piece of ** squeeze out of? Sounds like an overdose of your Paxil or other anti-depressent. Go cut yourself some more **. If you wanna see real poetry, THOR god of pens and ATLAS god of pens own you. |
| AntiPleasure 2005-10-08 ch 1, | abuseAh James, or shall I say.. mr. viking haha. I love the prose that you write, I wish I had something constructive to say - I always say that, arrgh. It's bluntly put together and I smirked at this part: "For menAre man.Ah desireWould set such a large fire" Nicely done. I wrote something a little while ago James if you're interested, I don't think anyone fully understands it though and just see it as one thing. Take care. Looks like you haven't wrote anything for a while either. Jenna x |
| lordelfy 2005-09-01 ch 1, | abusegood poem |