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twenty-second seduction
2005-12-30
ch 1,
abusethis is beautiful.
Gemma Viridian
2005-11-02
ch 1,
abuseI absolutely love the poetry you write. You've got a compelling, unique style that really keeps the reader emotionally hooked. Nice job.

(Oh, and I agree 100% with the Reagan thing in your profile. Any ** who tries to pass ketchup off as a goddamn vegetable to avoid funding public schools is not a compassionate man.)
MaxxRidarr
2005-10-30
ch 1,
abuseWhere did this piece of ** squeeze out of? Sounds like an overdose of your Paxil or other anti-depressent. Go cut yourself some more **.

If you wanna see real poetry, THOR god of pens and ATLAS god of pens own you.
AntiPleasure
2005-10-08
ch 1,
abuseAh James, or shall I say.. mr. viking haha. I love the prose that you write, I wish I had something constructive to say - I always say that, arrgh. It's bluntly put together and I smirked at this part:

"For menAre man.Ah desireWould set such a large fire"

Nicely done. I wrote something a little while ago James if you're interested, I don't think anyone fully understands it though and just see it as one thing.

Take care. Looks like you haven't wrote anything for a while either.

Jenna x
lordelfy
2005-09-01
ch 1,
abusegood poem
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