Good poem. It make me think of the men my gramps must have known.

such a sad ending... beautifully written though.. powerful and sad.. awesome job

aw, the end gave me chills! so sad just a few days before he went home he was killed! so sad! i bet it has happend to many, so true adn so sad, good job and keep it up

i like your poem but i disagree. there is nothing good and noble about war. it is just fighting and killing. death and revenge, nothing good can come of it...but (stupid as it sounds) what you write makes so much sence it makes me wonder...

omg its great keep up the great work!

Powerful piece, but I don't agree with you; their is nothing heroic about dieing, especially during war.

Juliet.