Powerful.
"I won't need you in the Spring"
"You will rot/ but I am radiant."
Like; I am not unbroken but I will heal.
This is beautiful.

i dont know what yalda is, hm

very pretty poem though, the coming out of the egg image was really strong though, i liked that, child waste too, so very excellent

Fantastic word choice and descriptions. Just paints the grittiest image in my head. you will rot - but i am radiant, a solstice Goddess crowned.

I love that part. Wonderful.

This is so beautiful! It's one of those poems I call 'mouthful' poems for some odd reason..like you can't fit it all in your mouth. Or juicy poems. Very nice. :D I'm tired.

"you will wilt when/I steal the sun"

genius lines, absolute genius

I get a garden-y feel. eden perhaps? don't know, but it's wonderful.

Rise up and claim your self-sovereignty.

I'm almost tempted to type a string of obsenities to describe how much I loved this poem. The imagery is perfection times 503548381169. I don't know how you came up with these amazingamazing things. 'a solstice Goddess crowned/in a calligraphy scrawl of frost crystals/but the icicle armor of Yalda' - Ihavenowords.

Powerful and passionate, I loved every word. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.