Oh, wow. This is amazing.

First of all, I love the format.

The end... its just so, 'ha, take that', that I can't help but love it. Good job!

Reminds me of my father. x.x

- ala :D

you are clever with your ending! poetry is form, and you write as well as always.

Clever ending. This very painful and beautiful and again I am so sorry for not reading and reviewing sooner. Keep up the good work! QueenVixta

yes... the usual parent puttig down their children scenario good poem

keep writing!

I really like the style of this poem! It's very unique and different. Good job!

This is good, I like the form used, and the emotion is definetly there. nice work. Bravo!