   claireponcherrii 2008-04-14 . chapter 1ooh! theres a sequel?! |
 Le Soleil Avant le Crepuscule 2006-01-05 . chapter 20It's over... *sniffle* Haha... Sweet end to a sweet sequel, though I think maybe you should have finished with chapter 19... Meh, 20 was still good, but didn't have as good an ending. Keep updating your other stories! |
 bulba17 2005-12-27 . chapter 1This story is really good, please continue this story. |
| Le Soleil Avant le Crepuscule 2005-12-23 . chapter 17 Yay! Another chapter! Hehe, love it! I'm in suspense about Ryan and Gab, keep updating! |
| caryn1150 2005-12-04 . chapter 16 i really cant wait till the next one! |
| Le Soleil Avant le Crepuscule 2005-12-04 . chapter 16 Sweet chapter, heh heh heh... I dunno what else to say, except you may want to make sure the words are spelled correctly. Lol, but I love the story, please keep updating! |
| Le Soleil Avant le Crepuscule 2005-12-03 . chapter 15 Hahaha, I love this story! I've just been too lazy to review until now... I'ts cool how you used yourself and your friends as characters. I've been like obsesively following your story. Sorry it took so long to review, but I have now, so ha! Good work, you're a good writer. |
| caryn1150 2005-12-03 . chapter 14 when are you going to update? |
| caryn1150 2005-11-29 . chapter 15 i love it! |
| SweetCute 2005-09-24 . chapter 8 OMG this is great! im in suspence to see what happens net and you made your friends so funny i enjoyed the first one too keep writing! |
| KeitaWolf 2005-09-03 . chapter 2 Entertaining.
This is written very simply. You might want to try adding in some more actions, between the dialogue, to help develop your writing. |
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