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Reviews For: Smile for Me
devotedpickel 2005-09-01 . chapter 1
That is such a good poem!
soi.deliciosa 2005-09-01 . chapter 1
heartbreaking
eighteen hundred 2005-09-01 . chapter 1
This could use more eloquence. More depth, description, just emotion in general.
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