Yes! That's just amazing - once again, your writing is so wonderfully... well, absolutely amazing. Can I describe it? No, but the simplicity of the subject is suddenly painted so pretty that --

Ah, I'm shutting up now. Can't think in coherent sentences. Fav line: //wrinkled from clinging so closeto all that has to be said...//

so good, seems to say so much with - casts such a twisted image of a commonly seen thing, i dont know, muchly enjoyed this one

Wow, this is a dedication that speaks of a dedication, delicate and small. Loved how my eyes ticked to a stop on the last stanza. Good job!

:) beautiful, beautiful.

I liek the ending a lot.. nicely done

it reminded me of Sylvia Plath, which is ALWAYS a good thing. :)

Great topic, true and personal.

You wrote this in a way that lets people take something of it away with them; plant it into their minds and let the truth of their own matter grow around it. The dedications are always small, so few people are worth mentioning in something so important as a dedication, but their usual the people who mean to much to you that they have power to stop time.

Much love,Juliet.

Detailed imagery, I love it. 'bobbly dearly and italicized/wrinkled from clinging so close' - I can't explain why, but I love those lines!

ah, i love it. "just a water bubble" i ADORE it.