|Reviews for Ferndale|
| AlwaysAmberella 9/17/05 . chapter 1
again. speechless, well almost, I should be used to this, but everytime I read one of your works, I am amazed at how much you put into them. They're real, truthful, honest, incredible, I just wish I had what it took to be incredible...like you.
| Charity F 9/9/05 . chapter 1
reminiscence...i like it!
| simpleplan13 9/7/05 . chapter 1
then.. thanpretending to spark the attention of a Clarke Gabel... Gable
I like this.. the story is sweet & not as sad as your usual ones.. i like the ending too
| Nobody-n-Particular 9/7/05 . chapter 1
| backseats on thursdays 9/3/05 . chapter 1
| Chaotic Lionel 9/3/05 . chapter 1
Very straightforward and explanatory; peering into the eyes of someone younger though developing into adulthood and I'm at a loss for words as to how well you portrayed this imagery, these feelings that may have both warmed and plagued you back then. Good read.
| SeaVoi 9/2/05 . chapter 1
burn like fires
on the freeway.)"
what a good line, well what a good three lines. :)
| poetic abortion 9/2/05 . chapter 1
I ache to be young again ... this whole thing is brilliant and can not leave me without having this aching feeling after reading. the whole thing is gorgeous on its own and makes one yearn to be twelve. lovely, lovely.
| Elizabeth Ebony 9/2/05 . chapter 1
not signed in.I am twelve...i suppose it feels like that when you get poem,quite sad but not .
| 6549875654987 9/2/05 . chapter 1
*sigh* I adore this poem. I wish I was 12 again...
I really like your line breaks and the flow from one memory to another... awesome
| naughtgreen 9/2/05 . chapter 1
Nostalgia makes for good art.
| method acting 9/2/05 . chapter 1
I don't like the formatting, but I supose it adds an intesnity. I love this peice. Very real. Lovely job.
| morbidmoogle 9/2/05 . chapter 1
This poem is like a story, being recorded as the speaker talks, with the breaths in all the right places. I thought this piece was wonderful.
| THROUGHTHESEEYES 9/2/05 . chapter 1
I loved the format of the poem...short lines which seemed to help emphasize the nouns. Almost like a saga...The saga of Juliet! Great job.
| Moonjava 9/2/05 . chapter 1
Wow, so, so good. I like it.