ok first things first that made me cry and second that was a terrible way to end it. they should have gone back to spain ahd fun hooked up you no somthing along those lines. other than that it was a really good story

u so cannot leave it hangin there do another one about caddie and ryan coz i think they are great together it would be soo great if they got together lov sweetcandiangel plzz do wot i sed plz

"I began to cry" is really friggin abrupt! I was like 'o.0 wtf??'

Aw... that's sweet. Even though you coulda milked it a little more, maybe a smooch... XDD

You don't need to use the ()'s in your first paragraph, they detract a little from the flow of the sentence; just use COMMAS! ARG!

Smashy-smashy :D Even though the smashing itself could use more description.

Don't delete Mike2! I mean, just say in your profile or something that it's on hiatus, but never delete your stuff! Gah, lookit me, I've got all this ** with only one chappie that I haven't updated in forever. IM me some time, I'll give you some random plot ideas.

Ooh, review-y.

Yeah, I have nothing to say. Good chap tho.

Liked the emotion, even thought it coulda gone a little slower, with more description of what was going on in Caddie's head, or people's facial expressions, etc. Also, you're doing that thing again where you make all the characters seem like really pompus English professors becasue they speak way too formally and poetically.

OMG THAT WAS THE WORS ENDING IN THE WHOLE WORLD! GOD REBECCA YOU CA DO SO MUCH BETTER LOL okay is there going to be a elpalouge (spellings prob worong)

Love,

Pissy

** rebecca you can't delete mike 2! are you crazy then at least add on to mike the first one...omg this story is totally messed up i can tell im gonna hate the ending lol

Jennie aka pissy

OKay i realy like it but i dont want her to go home! OMG you dont understand im freeking out ah i hate my life!

Hell yes that line was mine lol okay so good chappie i like it and if jess is anything you say he is he is gorgeous lol

Tee hee evilness. Ooh, plot twist-y! The exposition is kinda forward, and it's weird (but understandable) how they're hugging already. W/e... nice chappie!!

I like this chappie its cute...we have to write a lawyers love life i didnt realize this but i think i have the first chapter down ill ttyl

Love

Jennie

Jennifer i no my name is Jennie not Jennifer but still ugh! lol i love the tucker hehe okay so i love you rebecca your the best person on the world! ah im so annoyed with my life lol you know what im talking about

British accents ARE hott, aren't they? *swoon* And I dunno, I liked this chappie. Character crap, buddings romances, bitchy popular people... ^_^ well-written-ness.

hey! this sounds pretty good...by the way, i am writing a new story, "Falling in Love Again" and a bunch of reveiwers have liked it, so would you plz tell me what you think? thankx!

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