this was beautiful and descriptive.
it some how had a gloomy sort of feel,
but i liked it.
you have a knack for poetry.

nice work, very eloquent and beautifully structured.

ta for the review, the poem is just a bit of music trivia, and something that happened listening to pink floyd- i could explain in more depth but it would probably bore you

So sad and yet it makes me think of locked perseverence and determination. The real beauty lies in the existence of love amiss the darkness and pain. Thnx for sharing this!

Deep, and well-detailed, I loved it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.