I like the structure of it-certainly not a normal way to do it, but excellent nonetheless.

On another note-we have the same birthday! It's fate! Meaning what, exactly, I have no idea...**laugh** I am delighted that you like my work, as you are someone whose writing I admire immensely. **takes time off for fangirl-squeal**

The next chapter should be coming soon. If you're interested **hopehope** My FF.net account is under homepage on my main FP.com page.