"(Watches wolfie scowl in thought and race off to find what I'm talking about)... Good Hunting! And if you find them, I will acknowledge it. :)"

Never even acknowledged this part. But now I will.

When Jess first meets Aradon there is a falcon in the sky that Jess noticed before Aradon even appeared but then it was gone. But I have noticed some of these occurences...umm, there was a part with Aradon's brother, it was either that or that Rick person, but I think it was the brother who had gold flecks in his eyes. And one time when Aradon laughed his eyes went from their normal color to a brownish/hazel color. And Jess's eyes turn a greenish color? There are far more, but you know I'm sure I would be boring you with all of them.

Is this what you were talking about, btw?

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Now for the rest of the story, that I stupidly abandoned for awhile...but I have a really good reason. From like chapter nine onward I was pregnant and more worried about everything else, that I neglected to even skim these chapters. Hope you can forgive me?

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Well...it's even more confusing then I thought. Though now I'm a bit more openminded then I was before, and it's not all that confusing. Just the normal things like the history and all that. Though I am far more ** off at Reuban and Aradon for some odd reason. Maybe the tension between them is getting to me. Not only that but the tension and idiocy between Reuban and Jess. Ugh, not only that but the way Aradon acts is making me think he's like in love with her.

Ugh, that nightmare with her seeing the ranch burn and Val and Calindra dead on the roadside. It scared me to say the least. But I'm glad Aradon was there...though I'm still trying to figure out why she was in 'his' room.

Aradon's past is sad, it's probably a good thing I didn't read any of this until now. Hormones would have made me cry through the whole thing and my husband would be scared of me. Rambling again. Sorry.

Isn't the title of chapter seventeen either a song name or lyrics from a song? (A totally pointless question, you don't need to answer)

Poor Jess, I know how hard it is to lose a father and to not be able to go to your brother...only in my case my brother couldn't come to me. I just hope that she won't take the news of Calindra and Val to heart and think it all her fault.

I believe that the rest of this story, whenever it comes along it going to be wonderful. You have far more talent then I could ever hope for. Please keep up the great work and well, I won't ask you to update because I'm not like that.

Sorry but this isn't really a review. I hope this isn't a stupid question but where is The Dance Master PartI?

This is really good!! keep it up!

The Dance Master, Part Two is every bit as captivating as Part One... the characters and story continue to develop and grow more complex with each new chapter. I am eagerly awaiting the rest of this story. Keep up the good work and don't make me wait too long! :)

Is that the box that Jess got in the beginning of the first part, that held the medallion, and err those two other objects that for the life of my I can't remmeber and keep thinking one of them was like a rock or something. But I think that's wrong.

Anyway, something that just came to mind, does Aradon know about Reuben having a medallion like Jess'? I can't remember if you covered that.

Another question, (It's strange how they all come to me when I'm falling asleep) Is Reuben jealous of Aradon and how Aradon is there to protect Jess while he (Reuben) can't? He seems pretty jealous to me but then so does Aradon. That just confuses me.

Yes, another thing I need help understanding...It has to do with this sentence; "Yet still there was no reference she could find to the artifacts that defied existence in the form of her familial inheritance."

The information she is trying to find about the artifacts; I thought that there was nothing written about them. I'm probably messing something up but I could have sworn that in the first part you said something about how there was no written records on the artifacts or about what was happening to Jess.

Feel free to get confused at what I'm saying. I tend to jumble up words so that sentences make no sense.

Anyway, this is a little late but eh I still felt like saying it.

Aragorn and Aradon are two different people, what I meant was like sometimes the way he acts is similar to the way Aragorn acts. It's kinda hard to explain. He (Aradon) also promised in a way to protect Jess like Aragorn promised to protect Frodo. That's what I meant. The guard protecting Jess, I forget the totaly title, is sort of like the Rangers. That's all I really meant. I wasn't saying that Aradon and Aragorn were the same.

I know Jess and Reuben aren't related I just didn't get the relationship between their house's, but thanks for clearing that up for me.

It's not easy coming home from a long day at work only to find an author alert in your inbox telling you someone updated. normally even if I am tired I at least try to read the chapter though I don't get around to reviewing all the time.

Alright now, as usual awesome last few chapters. Neways, keep up the great work and update soon.

I think your story has quite honestly blwon me away. it is very similar, yet totally different from Mercedes lackeley's series. PLease finish the story, I'm dying to know the rest.

Hehe, sorry I keep coming to review this but whenever I actually got o click the button I always have to leave to do something else. So I'm finally reviewing.

Your doing a wonderful job. I can't wait for Jess to see her mother because if I remember she is still alive like Jess' uncle. Anyway, Aradon is in a way like Aragorn from LotR. He, Aradon, is probably one of my more favorite characters in this apart from Jess. One thing that gets me is that I don't really understand the House of dracon and how Jess and Reuben are connected through it. So you might want to explain it a little clearer. I understood most of it, just not everything. Other then that I love this story and can't wait for more. update soon.