|Reviews for Pheonix to Arise|
| Nine-Black-Roses 6/7/06 . chapter 1
this has got to be one of my truly fantastic and i love the concepts you bring into this.i absolutley love the first again the imagery is really gd in it up the gr8 work.x
| Niels Stegeman 5/23/06 . chapter 1
Beautiful. I enjoyed reading this very much. Well done!
| from beneath the bell jar 1/17/06 . chapter 1
This is such a cool poem. Some really creative lines as well. Love it.
| Fireeye Howlsong Rainpelt 11/6/05 . chapter 1
Good. Emotion-filled and I LOVE the flow. Great choice of words; I never would've thought of Phoenix to go with something like this, but it's great.
Keep writing, please, this is good. And thx for the review; sorry it took so long to review you back.
| deletemyaccount2012 9/28/05 . chapter 1
Wow, that was beautiful.
| classic violet 9/8/05 . chapter 1
I loved the rhyming. I loved the words. I loved everything about this poem, it was so enchanting (I supposed that's the right word to use).
| simpleplan13 9/7/05 . chapter 1
Dancing like dust on a winters breeze... winter's
I like the repeated stanza and the first stanza is really cool too... powerful & very disturbing images
| hann 9/7/05 . chapter 1
ooh, i like that, very good. very powerful and lovely imagery
| Anat Qetesh 9/5/05 . chapter 1
wow, beautiful imagery, words, it was visible, great rythmn and flow.. just wow!
| Thyrt 9/3/05 . chapter 1
oh i love thatit was really goodgreat job
| SliversofSilverPain 9/3/05 . chapter 1
Wow... that's so amazing... so sad... I like the image of the phoenix ariseing from the ashes of a burnt rose... you probly didn't write that, but my mind linked it; brilliant. beautiful poem... well written, very sad, but very very good.