this has got to be one of my favourite.its truly fantastic and i love the concepts you bring into this.i absolutley love the first stanza.and again the imagery is really gd in it all.keep up the gr8 work.x

Beautiful. I enjoyed reading this very much. Well done!

This is such a cool poem. Some really creative lines as well. Love it.

Good. Emotion-filled and I LOVE the flow. Great choice of words; I never would've thought of Phoenix to go with something like this, but it's great.

Keep writing, please, this is good. And thx for the review; sorry it took so long to review you back.

Wow, that was beautiful.

I loved the rhyming. I loved the words. I loved everything about this poem, it was so enchanting (I supposed that's the right word to use).

Dancing like dust on a winters breeze... winter's

I like the repeated stanza and the first stanza is really cool too... powerful & very disturbing images

ooh, i like that, very good. very powerful and lovely imagery

wow, beautiful imagery, words, it was visible, great rythmn and flow.. just wow!

oh i love thatit was really goodgreat job

Wow... that's so amazing... so sad... I like the image of the phoenix ariseing from the ashes of a burnt rose... you probly didn't write that, but my mind linked it; brilliant. beautiful poem... well written, very sad, but very very good.