Wow. I'm speechless! Wow. This was awesome! Very deep and profound! I love this poem. You have some great talent. This is definately going into my favorites! Keep it up!

~Sephiroth's heir

very cool... I love the first stanza... im not too crazy about the third line in the second to last stanza though...

Deep, and well-detailed, I loved the detail. This was raw and intense, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.