this is special...

love it.

love the beginning...

~Liz

ps. love ur profile..

the last tw lines are really great...although something in the 14th line is bothering me...i know you made it "hid" for the sake of the rhyme but i just think it really sounds awkward...maybe you could change it to "It all we just hid" or some sort of...oh and pls, if you have the time, pls do review some of my poems...thanks...

truly yours...

Heartfelt and honest; I loved the remembrence in this, I felt like I kknew these people.

Juliet.