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| Exiled-Knight 2005-10-21 ch 1,   | It was an interesting read, the drug addiction fit nicely into the plot. Though one criticism...it is dying not dieing. |
| Davifflaelan 2005-09-25 ch 2, | Well... that was delightful to say the least. ^^ Tell me, were do you think up your ideas. |
| BomarcPres 2005-09-05 ch 1, | Very nice. I hope there is more of this to follow. |
| Judgement(Mathew 2005-09-03 ch 1, | Good one shot i think... I like the description and Amelia is a very unlikable person. Ma† |
| the duck in the rain 2005-09-02 ch 1, | i love how this just unfolded. caught your attention at the very beginning, and her drug addiction fell in so perfectly. It all fit, there was nothing akward about it. it was just really well written. And i loved the ending, it makes me want more. >_ |