Good work. Tight and concise, lovely language, interesting images. Adding to favorites.

I like the literary references and how they fit so easily into the flow. Very vivid and relatable scene captured. Part memory, and part literature and its place in real life. Well done.

I love this. Memories..man.

Fantastic job. I love the entire second stanza, it's heartwrenching.

Ah! The Wasteland makes its triumphant appearance.

The bit about Kansas and Oz made me smile.

wow. that was incredible.