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| Blue Moon Eternal 2006-02-19 ch 1,  | abuseI loved this poem. I thought you did a very good job. I’m sure that you did a very good job with your artwork too, but you were probably too humble to notice and sad songs are good. They remind you that you’re not alone. But, back to the poem. I loved when you said: “And like after a summer rain, my heart finally cools down after the intense heat of sorrow.” It was something that definitely stuck with me. I thought it was great and perhaps my favorite poem of yours, at least so far. Please continue to write! |
| renru-no-ren 2005-11-28 ch 1, | abuse*bursts into tears* 0.0 *hugs* |