Ah yes, I always wanted to paint, or at least draw beautiful pictures, but alas, my hands won't draw what's in my head.

Anyway, beautiful descriptions, I can tell you spent a lot of time on this. And of course, long live the Ninja Turtles!

Touching. Very touching. You are an artist, if not with paint, then with words.

A bit abstract and vague for my taste, but my taste doesn't govern the quality of the story. I love the way you capture the colors of each person, the descriptions are beautiful. I can tell you spent a lot of time on this, as it's almost perfect. I love the connection to the Ninja Turtles, adds a bit of humor to the semi-darkness of the rest. Keep it up; you've got talent!

--Cerii-chan!