 Speckleddove 2008-03-11 . chapter 1That poem really spoke to me. |
 norg 2006-01-21 . chapter 1great work, it reflects the whole of conspiracie of human emtions in any situation, i like the line "We fear each stranger, But we are all strangers." |
 Sapphire Spectrum 2006-01-15 . chapter 1I can relate to this - I remember feeling scared going back on the Tube after the bombings. My friend was on the carriage behind one that exploded - and had to be guided out of the rubble along the train tracks. It's so scary to think about. Brilliant poem. |
 I Want a Pippin Stuffy 2005-09-03 . chapter 1 ooh, very very good. Captures the feeling well. |
 DarkWonders 2005-09-03 . chapter 1well done i like it, it osund likes me and hwat im goin throguh but yeh keep up the good work.. cheers jade.. |