I really like this...I wish I could give a bigger review but I am kinda of lost for words right now.

Very nice and a little thought-provoking. Good job.

~happy writing~

A poem with deep meanings... I was... really touched by it... I am sincerly grateful you posted that on this site.

through it all, learning faith as it were... beautiful your words as though a Morning Devotion on this New Day A Rising...

"Rceive A Blessing & Be A Blessing"

What a beautiful poem. God is always there. And it is written beautifully here.Its such a coincidence because I have a poem kinda like this.Its called "I Saw god Once". Hope you cud read it sometym. Thnx for sharing.

well done i lie this story its true to me i thoguth god was spoed to be there to help not cause pain and sadness. but yeh very well odne and keep up the good work.. cheers.. jade...