A sweet poem with good repitition. You make your point clear. Maybe you should think about putting in some periods and commas? Grammer counts :) Overall a nice poem about wanting to be with someone. good job.

aaw this is sweet I love it. I wish I could be close to my bf but he lives in a nother city :(

A very lovely and sincre poem. Good ending, it adds this poem all up. Thnx for sharing.