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mundoaparte 2005-09-03 . chapter 1
"I make you worseI cause more painPerhaps I should goYou would be better offGo back to the life I had"

My favorite lines. The best thing to do when you hate/love someone is let them go. Your poem makes me want to be a better writer. Truly wonderful.
elvenstorm 2005-09-03 . chapter 1
Ahh where would we be without good old angst poems. Like the repetition you use and the emotion that gets through. Well done.
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